Sunday, February 2, 2014

Blog Post #3: How Can You Provide Meaningful Feedback to YHour Peers?

I feel that peer editing is important because it is an arena where students can learn without the pressure of disappointing their professor. It is great to have the ability to receive another’s perceptions of the materials you all are learning in class. One student may pay closer attention to an important detail that another overlooked. By having a dialogue we can learn what one another though was most important about each assignment. I learned that peer editing involves giving compliments, suggestions, and corrections to a peer’s blog. There was a great emphasis on remaining positive when editing a peer’s writings. It is suggested that peers should start with a compliment of the work they are editing. I love this idea. It allows us to avoid fixating on errors. Clarity and specificity are needed when providing suggestions. The final step in editing seems to be the easiest. Correcting errors in grammar and punctuation do not require creativity. This step requires leaning on the comfortable rule of grammar we have been drilled to remember since grade school. The problem is that according to input method and the computer program used, some text can be changed without the author’s immediate knowledge. There is an emphasis on providing a quality peer review to ensure universal growth for peers.

2 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed reading your blog. I also agree that when peer editing you should not spend the entire process fixating on errors. This can do more harm than good in some situations. Your blog was effective in explaining how to provide feed back to your peers.


    One thing I would've liked to read more about is how you provide suggestions or corrections in a positive manner. Also in the instructions for this blog post it sates that we must wright two paragraphs. Although your post's length may be two paragraphs I cannot tell because the paragraphs are not separated. Also I may suggest naming the videos and slideshow that you got the information from.


    In your blog there a few grammatical errors. In your title I believe you meant your, but you accidentally put an H in the word. Also in the first sentence you said "I feel that peer editing is important because it is an arena where students can learn without the pressure of disappointing their professor" I am not sure if you meant to say arena or area. The wording just threw me off a little. Towards the end of your post the wording and structure got a little confusing for me. For example you said "The problem is that according to input method and the computer program used" I understand what you are trying to say but you may try a different wording for this sentence.



    Although you had a few grammatical errors Your post conveyed your main point effectively. I enjoyed reading your blog post, and like the picture you added to the end of your post.

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  2. Don't forget to include links to the original sources.

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